Homework 1
학생이 쓴 원문
Have you eaten traditional food in other countries? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
I ate a Ten-dong. I have known this Japanese traditional food. It is mixed rice and various fried foods. Originally I like fried food, so I enjoy eating it. Sometimes, if I visit a food store that has a bad skills to fry vegetables I feel bad. So, before I eat it, I am used to search a food store that has a good skills to fry ingredients.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ku [이름]! I appreciate your time and effort in making your composition. I love hearing stories from you. I hope that you continue to write whatever is on your mind. I am glad to know that you like fried foods. I like fried foods as well. We will talk more in class. I will see you then! ~T. Lyn
I ate a Ten-dong.
>>I have eaten tendon or tempura rice bowl.
I have known this Japanese traditional food.
>>I know that this is a traditional Japanese food.
It is mixed rice and various fried foods.
>>This dish is a mix of rice and various fried foods.
Originally I like fried food, so I enjoy eating it.
>>I usually like fried food, so I enjoy eating it.
Sometimes, if I visit a food store that has a bad skills to fry vegetables I feel bad.
>>Sometimes, I feel bad when I go to a restaurant where the technique of frying vegetables is not good.
So, before I eat it, I am used to search a food store that has a good skills to fry ingredient
>>So, I am used to looking for restaurant that have the skill to stir-fry their ingredients before eating.
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