Homework 1
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Finally i find this page!
When i got stressed, i usually drink greentea.
And watching youtude like listening of k-pop music, or watching animation surh as Demonslyer
But lf i meet my friends, we hangout to hot spot
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! We actually have similar ways to relax! Drinking green tea, watching YouTube or animations like Demon Slayer, and listening to K-pop are perfect for taking breaks. It’s also wonderful that you hang out with friends. Balancing alone time and social time is a healthy way to relieve stress.
-T. Sonny
Writing tip: When writing, it’s important to use consistent verb tenses, sticking to the same tense (past, present, or future) to make your writing clear and smooth.
When i got stressed, i usually drink greentea. And watching youtude like listening of k-pop music, or watching animation surh as Demonslyer
>>When I get stressed, I usually drink green tea and watch YouTube, listen to K-pop music, or watch animations such as Demon Slayer.
But lf i meet my friends, we hangout to hot spot
>>But if I meet my friends, we hang out at popular spots.
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