Homework 1
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].Sally.
There is limitation of capital.
Please, check my pending homework.
Hi John,
I arrived in <the> USA last Monday. We left <x> Rome, flew over <the> Alps and made a quick stop in <X> London.
There we went shopping in <x> Harrods, visited <the> Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in <the> Hyde Park.
On the following day we left for <X> New York. <x> time on board wasn't boring as there were two films to watch on <the> monitor.
<x> people on <the> plane were all <the> Italian.
Before we landed at <the> JFK airport, we saw <the> Statue of Liberty, <the> Ellis Island and <the> Empire State Building.
<The> hotel I stayed in was on <the> corner of <the> 42nd Street and <the> 5th Avenue.
I don't like <X> hotels very much, but I didn't have <x> time to rent an apartment.
Please say hello to Peter and Mandy.
Yours,
[이름]
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]^^Thank you dor doing your homework^^I\'ll see you later^^
T. Sally^^
Dear [Name].Sally.
>>>CORRECTThere is limitation of capital.>>>There is a limitation of capital(what do you mean by \"capital\"?)Please, check my pending homework.>>>CORRECTHi John,>>>CORRECTI arrived in <the> USA last Monday.
>>>CORRECT
We left <x> Rome, flew over <the> Alps and made a quick stop in <X> London.
>>>CORRECTThere we went shopping in <x> Harrods, visited <the> Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in <the> Hyde Park.
>>>There we went shopping in <x> Harrods, visited <the> Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in <X> Hyde Park.On the following day we left for <X> New York.
>>>CORRECT
<x> time on board wasn\'t boring as there were two films to watch on <the> monitor.
>>><The> time on board wasn\'t boring as there were two films to watch on <the> monitor.<x> people on <the> plane were all <the> Italian.
>>>><The> people on <the> plane were all <X> Italian.Before we landed at <the> JFK airport, we saw <the> Statue of Liberty, <the> Ellis Island and <the> Empire State Building.
>>>Before we landed at <X> JFK airport, we saw <the> Statue of Liberty, <X> Ellis Island and <the> Empire State Building.<The> hotel I stayed in was on <the> corner of <the> 42nd Street and <the> 5th Avenue.
>>><The> hotel I stayed in was on <the> corner of <X> 42nd Street and <X> 5th Avenue.I don\'t like <X> hotels very much, but I didn\'t have <x> time to rent an apartment.>>>CORRECTPlease say hello to Peter and Mandy.
>>> CORRECTYours,Peter
>>>CORRECT
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