Homework 1

2012-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Sally

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Dear [Name].Sally. There is limitation of capital. Please, check my pending homework. Hi John, I arrived in <the> USA last Monday. We left <x> Rome, flew over <the> Alps and made a quick stop in <X> London. There we went shopping in <x> Harrods, visited <the> Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in <the> Hyde Park. On the following day we left for <X> New York. <x> time on board wasn't boring as there were two films to watch on <the> monitor. <x> people on <the> plane were all <the> Italian. Before we landed at <the> JFK airport, we saw <the> Statue of Liberty, <the> Ellis Island and <the> Empire State Building. <The> hotel I stayed in was on <the> corner of <the> 42nd Street and <the> 5th Avenue. I don't like <X> hotels very much, but I didn't have <x> time to rent an apartment. Please say hello to Peter and Mandy. Yours, [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hey [이름]^^Thank you dor doing your homework^^I\'ll see you later^^ T. Sally^^ Dear [Name].Sally. >>>CORRECTThere is limitation of capital.>>>There is a limitation of capital(what do you mean by \"capital\"?)Please, check my pending homework.>>>CORRECTHi John,>>>CORRECTI arrived in <the> USA last Monday. >>>CORRECT We left <x> Rome, flew over <the> Alps and made a quick stop in <X> London. >>>CORRECTThere we went shopping in <x> Harrods, visited <the> Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in <the> Hyde Park. >>>There we went shopping in <x> Harrods, visited <the> Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in <X> Hyde Park.On the following day we left for <X> New York. >>>CORRECT <x> time on board wasn\'t boring as there were two films to watch on <the> monitor. >>><The> time on board wasn\'t boring as there were two films to watch on <the> monitor.<x> people on <the> plane were all <the> Italian. >>>><The> people on <the> plane were all <X> Italian.Before we landed at <the> JFK airport, we saw <the> Statue of Liberty, <the> Ellis Island and <the> Empire State Building. >>>Before we landed at <X> JFK airport, we saw <the> Statue of Liberty, <X> Ellis Island and <the> Empire State Building.<The> hotel I stayed in was on <the> corner of <the> 42nd Street and <the> 5th Avenue. >>><The> hotel I stayed in was on <the> corner of <X> 42nd Street and <X> 5th Avenue.I don\'t like <X> hotels very much, but I didn\'t have <x> time to rent an apartment.>>>CORRECTPlease say hello to Peter and Mandy. >>> CORRECTYours,Peter >>>CORRECT

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