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Dear [Name].Sally. I do all the pending homework. Please, check it. 1) many pupils 2) much time 3) much money 4) much dollars 5) much milk 6) many children 7) much water 8) much fun 9) many dogs 10) many people I'm Peter and I live in Germany. During summer I like to travel to Italy, because of the weather and the people there. Last summer I took a plane from Munich to Rome. From the airport we went to our hotel by bus. We stopped at a small restaurant for a quick meal. The driver parked the bus behind the restaurant. Nobody could find the bus and the driver, so we waited outside the restaurant for one hour. The driver was walking across the small park near the restaurant which we did not know. So we were very angry with him. But my holidays were great. We sat over campfires and went dancing till the early mornings.

I\'m impressed. You did quite well with the homework I gave you. I\'m glad you found time to do it. I\'m also very much impressed with your composition. Most of the additional things I corrected were just on the punctuation. Other than that, awesome job on the construction of your sentence. T. Sally Dear [Name].Sally.>>Correct!I do all the pending homework. >>I\'m doing all my pending homework.Please, check it.>>Please check it. (no need for a comma after \'please\')1) many pupils >>Correct!2) much time >>Correct!3) much money >>Correct!4) much dollars >>many dollars 5) much milk >>Correct!6) many children >>Correct!7) much water >>Correct!8) much fun >>Correct!9) many dogs >>Correct!10) many people >>Correct!I\'m Peter and I live in Germany. >>Correct!  During summer I like to travel to Italy, because of the weather and the people there. >>During summer, I like to travel to Italy because of the weather and the people there. (punctuation)  Last summer I took a plane from Munich to Rome. >>Correct! From the airport we went to our hotel by bus. >>From the airport, we went to tour hotel by bus. (punctuation) We stopped at a small restaurant for a quick meal. >>Correct! The driver parked the bus behind the restaurant. >>Correct! Nobody could find the bus and the driver, so we waited outside the restaurant for one hour. >>Correct! The driver was walking across the small park near the restaurant which we did not know. >>Correct! So we were very angry with him. >>So we were very angry at him. But my holidays were great. >>Correct! We sat over campfires and went dancing till the early mornings. >>Correct!