Homework-1

2012-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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To begin with, I will should study everyday Especially, My weak points in English, Grammar & Speaking. So I think need to speaking training grammatically. Yesterday My new teacher Verna said to me I need to watching American drama. On advice, I was download “White collar” “Desperate housewives”. I hope it Which is My Eng conversation skills are make remarkable progress. And I think I need to practice English listening) to improve it. And a composition work, too. What I want- Best thing is – I get a best conversation skills like a native. And maybe to be like it, I will should practice everyday. Yesterday I was meet New teacher in Power Eng. And she made my new name. It’s catheryn (right?) and to short, cathy/ I like it, pretty well. And I will try to get accustomed it. After 30 minutes, Our second communicate are start. Honestly That time to short than what I had expected. Today I will talk to about Noryangjin. Once in a week, I go there for my study . Verna see ya soon.!^^

강사 첨삭

Hi Cathy,

             thank you for the composition. I hope that in the future you will be a great English speaker. I know you can do it because you are very diligent. ^^ Aja! Have a great holiday! See you on Thursday!

~Teacher Verna~

To begin with, I will should study everyday Especially, My weak points in English, Grammar & Speaking.

>>To begin with, I should study hard everyday especially in my weak points in English which are grammar and speaking.

So I think need to speaking training grammatically.

>> So I think I need speaking training grammatically.

Yesterday My new teacher Verna said to me I need to watching American drama.

>> Yesterday, my new teacher Verna told me I need to watch American drama.

On advice, I was download “White collar” “Desperate housewives”. I hope it Which is My Eng conversation skills are make remarkable progress.

>>As advised, I downloaded, White Collar, Desperate housewives. I hope it will improve my English conversation skills. 

And I think I need to practice English listening to improve it. 

>>Correct

And a composition work, too.

>>Correct

What I want- Best thing is – I get a best conversation skills like a native.

>>What I want the most is to speak like a native English speaker.

And maybe to be like it, I will should practice everyday.

>>Correct

Yesterday I was meet New teacher in Power Eng.

>>Yesterday, I met my new teacher at Power English.

And she made my new name.

>>Correct

It’s catheryn (right?) and to short, cathy/ I like it, pretty well. 

>>It\'s Catherine. (Right?) And for short Cathy. I like it pretty well.

And I will try to get accustomed to it.

>>Correct

After 30 minutes, Our second communicate are start.

>>After 30 minutes, our class will start.

Honestly That time to short than what I had expected.

>>Honestly, that time is too short than I expected.

Today I will talk to about Noryangjin.

>>Correct

Once in a week, I go there for my study .

>>Correct

Verna see ya soon.!^^

>>Correct

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