Homework-1
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Cathy,
thank you for the composition. I hope that in the future you will be a great English speaker. I know you can do it because you are very diligent. ^^ Aja! Have a great holiday! See you on Thursday!
~Teacher Verna~
To begin with, I will should study everyday Especially, My weak points in English, Grammar & Speaking.
>>To begin with, I should study hard everyday especially in my weak points in English which are grammar and speaking.
So I think need to speaking training grammatically.
>> So I think I need speaking training grammatically.
Yesterday My new teacher Verna said to me I need to watching American drama.
>> Yesterday, my new teacher Verna told me I need to watch American drama.
On advice, I was download “White collar” “Desperate housewives”. I hope it Which is My Eng conversation skills are make remarkable progress.
>>As advised, I downloaded, White Collar, Desperate housewives. I hope it will improve my English conversation skills.
And I think I need to practice English listening to improve it.
>>Correct
And a composition work, too.
>>Correct
What I want- Best thing is – I get a best conversation skills like a native.
>>What I want the most is to speak like a native English speaker.
And maybe to be like it, I will should practice everyday.
>>Correct
Yesterday I was meet New teacher in Power Eng.
>>Yesterday, I met my new teacher at Power English.
And she made my new name.
>>Correct
It’s catheryn (right?) and to short, cathy/ I like it, pretty well.
>>It\'s Catherine. (Right?) And for short Cathy. I like it pretty well.
And I will try to get accustomed to it.
>>Correct
After 30 minutes, Our second communicate are start.
>>After 30 minutes, our class will start.
Honestly That time to short than what I had expected.
>>Honestly, that time is too short than I expected.
Today I will talk to about Noryangjin.
>>Correct
Once in a week, I go there for my study .
>>Correct
Verna see ya soon.!^^
>>Correct
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