Homework(1/18): Do you think you have a healthy life style?
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Hello Oh!!!
Yes, it is my real name!!!
I would like to think I am also health like you but I guess I need to change my lifestyle for this year so that I can also be healthy just like you. Thank you, Oh!!!
Take care!!!
T. Jeny
Friend Jennifer Cardenas Montero.
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Is your name right? haha
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I want not to forget your name.
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it is the reason i mentioned above.
>>It is the reason , I mentioned it above.
It\'s already evening.
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It was also a very busy day today.
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I am sorry for lately doing homework.
>>I am sorry for doing my homework late.
See you on Friday.
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= body =
Yes, I can confidently say that I have a healthy life style.
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The reasons are as follows:
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1. I happily work hard.
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I try not to be stressed while I work if possible.
>>I try not to be stressed while I am at work if possible.
>>I try not to be stressed while I\'m working if possible.
2. I do regular exercise.
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During weekdays,I mainly focus on exercising to relieve stress.
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On weekends, I always go hiking or ride a bicycle with my family.
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3. I play the guitar.
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When I have free time or feel depressed due to stress,
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I usually play the guitar without any thought and the I feel very happy.
>>I usually play the guitar without thinking about anything and it makes me feel happy.
4. And above all, it is already 19th days since I quit smoking.
>>4. And above all, it is already 19 days since I quit smoking.
Is there any better reason or evidence?
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