homework(1.19)
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Dominic,
I searched the movie what you said in our last class.
The korean title of the movie is 'BOKMYEON DALHO"
BOKMYEON is a kind of mask, DALHO is the name of the main charactor.^^
I have not watched the movie, so it surprises me that you watched the movie.^^
I did the homework as follows.
Please correct my composition.
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Use the following words in a sentence. [Minimum of 6 words]
1. Modern - The cafe was built with modern style.
2. laid back - All members of his family are laid back.
3. intense - The politician is speaking very intense speech.
4. work-out - I work-out at the gym evey day.
5. despite - He doesn't have much money despite he works very hard.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [Name]! Yeah, it\'s the same movie that I was talking about last night. Haha! It\'s a feel good movie, that\'s why a friend recommended it to me. Thanks for looking it up. By the way, good job on your homework, just a few tweaks in your gammar. I\'ll be with you soon. Bye!
-T.Dominic -
Hi Dominic,
>>CORRECTI searched the movie what you said in our last class.
>>CORRECTThe korean title of the movie is \'BOKMYEON DALHO\".
>>CORRECT [please don\'t forget your punctuation(.)] BOKMYEON is a kind of mask, DALHO is the name of the main charactor.^^
>> BOKMYEON is a kind of mask, DALHO is the name of the main character.^^I have not watched the movie, so it surprises me that you watched the movie.^^>> I have not watched the movie, so it surprises me that you watched the it.^^I did the homework as follows.
>>CORRECT
Please correct my composition.
>>CORRECTHOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Use the following words in a sentence. [Minimum of 6 words]1. Modern - The cafe was built with modern style.
>> The cafe was built with a modern style.2. laid back - All members of his family are laid back.
>>CORRECT3. intense - The politician is speaking very intense speech.
>> The politician is speaking very a intense speech.
>> The politician is delivering very a intense speech.4. work-out - I work-out at the gym evey day.
>>CORRECT5. despite - He doesn\'t have much money despite he works very hard.
>> He doesn\'t have much money despite his hard work.
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