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2012-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Dominic

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Hi Dominic, I searched the movie what you said in our last class. The korean title of the movie is 'BOKMYEON DALHO" BOKMYEON is a kind of mask, DALHO is the name of the main charactor.^^ I have not watched the movie, so it surprises me that you watched the movie.^^ I did the homework as follows. Please correct my composition. HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Use the following words in a sentence. [Minimum of 6 words] 1. Modern - The cafe was built with modern style. 2. laid back - All members of his family are laid back. 3. intense - The politician is speaking very intense speech. 4. work-out - I work-out at the gym evey day. 5. despite - He doesn't have much money despite he works very hard.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [Name]! Yeah, it\'s the same movie that I was talking about last night. Haha! It\'s a feel good movie, that\'s why a friend recommended it to me. Thanks for looking it up. By the way, good job on your homework, just a few tweaks in your gammar.  I\'ll be with you soon. Bye! -T.Dominic -   Hi Dominic, >>CORRECTI searched the movie what you said in our last class. >>CORRECTThe korean title of the movie is \'BOKMYEON DALHO\". >>CORRECT [please don\'t forget your punctuation(.)] BOKMYEON is a kind of mask, DALHO is the name of the main charactor.^^ >> BOKMYEON is a kind of mask, DALHO is the name of the main character.^^I have not watched the movie, so it surprises me that you watched the movie.^^>> I have not watched the movie, so it surprises me that you watched the it.^^I did the homework as follows. >>CORRECT Please correct my composition. >>CORRECTHOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Use the following words in a sentence. [Minimum of 6 words]1. Modern - The cafe was built with modern style. >> The cafe was built with a modern style.2. laid back - All members of his family are laid back. >>CORRECT3. intense - The politician is speaking very intense speech. >> The politician is speaking very a intense speech. >> The politician is delivering very a intense speech.4. work-out - I work-out at the gym evey day. >>CORRECT5. despite - He doesn\'t have much money despite he works very hard. >> He doesn\'t have much money despite his hard work.  

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