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2012-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Ms.Aurora! ☆★HAPPY NEW YEAR ^▽^★☆ I will be a good student for you in this year:) ----------- 1.It is a serious offence to _a__ the army. a. desert b. dessert 2.The area was _b__ for gold since 1900. a. mind b. mined 3.Diane Fossey was famous for her work with the mountain _b__ groups in Rwanda. a. gorilla b. guerrilla 4.A _a__ is a type of monk. a. friar b. fryer 5.A _b__ is a type of shellfish. a. muscle b. mussel Always, thank you! Have a nice day!

강사 첨삭

HI [이름]! An awesome New Year to you! First of all, allow me to congratulate you for doing a good job in doing your homework. You started this year by answering your homework perfectly! Hurray! (^_^) I hope you have an amazing year ahead of you, again, good job! (*_*) ~T.Aurora(^^,)   Hi Ms.Aurora! >> Correct!  ☆★HAPPY NEW YEAR ^▽^★☆ >> Correct!  I will be a good student for you in this year:) >> I will be a good student this year.  -----------  1.It is a serious offence to _a__ the army.  a. desert  b. dessert >> Correct!  2.The area was _b__ for gold since 1900.  a. mind  b. mined >> Correct!  3.Diane Fossey was famous for her work with the mountain _b__ groups in Rwanda.  a. gorilla  b. guerrilla >> Correct!  4.A _a__ is a type of monk.  a. friar  b. fryer >> Correct!  5.A _b__ is a type of shellfish.  a. muscle  b. mussel >> Correct!  Always, thank you! Have a nice day! >> Correct!  

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