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2011-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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hi teacher~ I'm in home. I read a book again. but to half of all, lesson 30. When i learned, Things that i think to know isn't known. but teacher don't sad only. I have things that was remember your teaching. About word of doing not remember, I found the dictionary. these are owe and remembrance. by this book I learned detail expression in life. so i'm happy. I'll read today, too. For least half. thank you sir~

강사 첨삭

Hello Susan! I am so happy and proud that you are learning something from me. Please just continue writing to me so that I could help you with your writing skills. Please try to remember the sentence construction I have taught you so that you wilol become better next time. See you in class. I already have a new book for you please try to review on that and continue doing your homework here. It really helps a lot. T.Faye Here are your corrections: hi teacher~ >>Correct!I\'m in home. >>I'm at home.I read a book again. >>I read my book again. but to half of all, lesson 30.>>But I only read half of lesson 30.When i learned, Things that i think to know isn\'t known. >>When I learned things that I don't know are known.but teacher don\'t sad only. >>Don't be sad. I have things that was remember your teaching.>>I remember some of the things that you taught me. About word of doing not remember, I found the dictionary. >>I only know a few words, I found the others in the dictionary.these are owe and remembrance. >>These are the words that I owe and remember.by this book I learned detail expression in life. >>I have learned some detailed expressions for life in this book. so i\'m happy.>>Correct!I\'ll read today, too. For least half. >>I'll read at least half of it today, too. thank you sir~ >>Thank you ma'am. >>Sir: is for a male person.

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