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학생이 쓴 원문
hi teacher~
I'm in home.
I read a book again. but to half of all, lesson 30.
When i learned, Things that i think to know isn't known.
but teacher don't sad only. I have things that was remember your teaching.
About word of doing not remember, I found the dictionary.
these are owe and remembrance.
by this book I learned detail expression in life. so i'm happy.
I'll read today, too. For least half.
thank you sir~
강사 첨삭
Hello Susan!
I am so happy and proud that you are learning something from me. Please just continue writing to me so that I could help you with your writing skills. Please try to remember the sentence construction I have taught you so that you wilol become better next time. See you in class. I already have a new book for you please try to review on that and continue doing your homework here. It really helps a lot.
T.Faye
Here are your corrections:
hi teacher~
>>Correct!I\'m in home.
>>I'm at home.I read a book again.
>>I read my book again.
but to half of all, lesson 30.>>But I only read half of lesson 30.When i learned, Things that i think to know isn\'t known.
>>When I learned things that I don't know are known.but teacher don\'t sad only.
>>Don't be sad.
I have things that was remember your teaching.>>I remember some of the things that you taught me.
About word of doing not remember, I found the dictionary.
>>I only know a few words, I found the others in the dictionary.these are owe and remembrance.
>>These are the words that I owe and remember.by this book I learned detail expression in life.
>>I have learned some detailed expressions for life in this book.
so i\'m happy.>>Correct!I\'ll read today, too. For least half.
>>I'll read at least half of it today, too. thank you sir~
>>Thank you ma'am.
>>Sir: is for a male person.
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