HOMEWORK 1&2
학생이 쓴 원문
HW1
actually I have never doing skiing. I have several chances before but you know, I am a chicken. :( I saw a lot of news about accident during take skiing. so I don\'t want to try it. haha. by the way for my healthy, I enrolled fitness center 2 months ago. but you know, I didn\'t go there almost a month, because of my final exam of Univ. I will graduate in this up coming Feb, so I want to do my best in this my final exam and want to show my best grade to my parents. so i don\'t have much time to go there. but i promise I will go fitness center again in this Monday. :)
HW2
yes. sadly, i do eat a lot during the holiday. it\'s one of bad habit i have and i extremely want to change.
you know, last weekend, i ate too much, i had stomach. it was so regretful.
i really want to change this bad habit but i can\'t success until today.
but you know, it\'s 2020! so i renew my mind to succeed. :)
강사 첨삭
Hi Layla!
The tone of your composition is very light and easy to read.
I hope you keep it up.
Be careful of capitalization and the use of articles in your sentences.
Take note of the suggestions below.
Let me know if you have any questions.
Good luck in your exams tomorrow!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
actually I have never doing skiing. >> Actually, I have never tried skiing.
I have several chances before but you know, I am a chicken.
>> There were several chances before but you know, I\'m chicken.
I saw a lot of news about accident during take skiing.
>> I saw a lot of accidents related to skiing on the news.
so I don\'t want to try it.
>> That\'s why I don\'t want to try it.
by the way for my healthy, I enrolled fitness center 2 months ago.
>> By the way, I actually enrolled in a fitness center for my health 2 months ago.
but you know, I didn\'t go there almost a month, because of my final exam of Univ.
>> However, I haven\'t been there for almost a month because of finals.
I will graduate in this up coming Feb, so I want to do my best in this my final exam and want to show my best grade to my parents.
>> I will graduate this February so I want to do my best in the final exams and I want to show the best grades to my parents.
so i don\'t have much time to go there.
>> That\'s why I don\'t have much time to go there.
but i promise I will go fitness center again in this Monday.
>> I promise that I will go to the fitness center again this Monday.
yes.
>> Yes, that\'s right.
sadly, i do eat a lot during the holiday.
>> Sadly, I do eat a lot during the holidays.
it\'s one of bad habit i have and i extremely want to change.
>> It\'s one of my bad habits that I desperately want to change.
you know, last weekend, i ate too much, i had stomach.
you know, last weekend, i ate too much, i had stomach.
>> Actually, I ate too much and had a stomachache last weekend.
it was so regretful.
>> I really regretted my actions.
i really want to change this bad habit but i can\'t success until today.
i really want to change this bad habit but i can\'t success until today.
>> I really want to change this bad habit but I can\'t succeed up to the present.
but you know, it\'s 2020!
but you know, it\'s 2020!
>> However, as you know, it\'s 2020!
so i renew my mind to succeed
>> So, I\'m willing to give it another try to succeed.
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