Homework 1.20
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Tourists and locals in Japan love ramen for its delicious, customizable flavors, filling nature, affordability, and speed, making it perfect for quick meals or socializing after activities like sports or late nights out, with both instant and restaurant versions deeply embedded in Japanese food culture and history. Its umami-rich broths and chewy noodles offer a satisfying experience that\'s both comforting and exciting.
As a student, you are always on the lookout for new restaurants for your cravings. Share your next food adventure here on your essay.
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I have to delay my today\'s class because I have a class at school in this morning.
Maybe I need to reschedule Wednesday and Friday until February 4.
I have to delay my class today because I have a class at school in this morning.
Maybe I need to reschedule classes on Wednesdays and Fridays until February 4.
HW
I really like going a ramen restaurant near my dormitory, the Gonzo Ramen.
It has a lot of noodle, vegetable, garlic, and meat.
It\'s very oily and I think it has a lot of kcal.
So, it\'s not healthy, but it\'s so addictive.
Every time I go there, there are many people in lines.
This restaurant has a special rule.
After finishing to eat, we should go out right now.
We don\'t spend time talking with someone sitting there.
I heard that the profit comes from fast recycling.
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It has a lot of noodles, vegetables, garlic, and meat.
It\'s very oily and I think it has a lot of calories.
So, it\'s not healthy, but it\'s so addictive.
Every time I go there, there are many people in the line.
This restaurant has a special rule.
After finishing to eat, we should go out right away.
We don\'t spend time talking with someone sitting there.
I heard that the profit comes from the fast cycle.
Also my go-to place is a gyudong restaurant.
Gyudong is made with beef and rice.
It is also located near my dormitory, but fat from the Gonzo Ramen.
Here is a very famous franchise restaurant in Japan.
It has advantages of serving fast and cheap price.
So, many students eat here.
It tastes good but honestly the restaurant smells kind of disgusting.
It is also located near my dormitory, but far from the Gonzo Ramen.
It is a very famous franchise restaurant in Japan.
It has advantages of serving fast and cheap prices.
So, many students eat here.
It tastes good but honestly the restaurant smells kind of disgusting.
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