Homework 1.21
학생이 쓴 원문
In what ways do mobile phones help you learn English?
Is it a good idea for schools to ban mobile phones in class?
: We can learn English by watching English learning video through our mobile phones.
I think It is a good idea for schools to ban mobile phones in class. Our school don\'t ban mobile phone but students can\'t use phones while having a class . But some students use their phones while having a class secretly. And It disturbs other student\'s concentration. So I think school ban phones at all.
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We can learn English by watching English learning video through our mobile phones.
>> We can learn English by watching English learning videos through our mobile phones.
I think It is a good idea for schools to ban mobile phones in class.
>> I think it is a good idea for schools to ban mobile phones in class.
Our school don\'t ban mobile phone but students can\'t use phones while having a class.
>> Our school doesn\'t ban mobile phones but students can\'t use phones while having a class.
But some students use their phones while having a class secretly.
>> CORRECT!
And It disturbs other student\'s concentration.
>> And It disturbs other students\' concentration.
So I think school ban phones at all.
>> So I think schools have to ban phones.
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