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2014-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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ESSAY: How should foreigners properly act in a Foreign country? I think forigners have to care about their own behavior, if it is wrong in some particular situations. And they should learn about culture in a foreign country from native people. When foreigners make a mistake, they have to say sorry to another party.

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Hi there [이름], How are you today? :) This is a great answer. Some foreigners would act differently to adjust in some countries that they travel to. It is a must however to behave properly to have better connections to the natives.^^ Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I think forigners have to care about their own behavior, if it is wrong in some particular situations. >> CORRECT OR> Foreigners must be careful with the way they act in another country. And they should learn about culture in a foreign country from native people. >> CORRECT OR> They can adapt to a foreign culture with the help of the natives. When foreigners make a mistake, they have to say sorry to another party. >> CORRECT OR> They must know how to apologize if they made a mistake.

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