Homework #1
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. If you will compare yourself either you're the one better or not, into something or someone, what or who will it be and why?
A.
To be honest, I couldn't understand the topic at first,
so I confirmed the topic by customer service center again. XD
Well... actually, I would like to reject the comparison,
because I think the comparison is just a see-saw or a scales.
Therefore I may feel inferior or superior than comparison target.
Why do we compare each other?
I don't want to do, and I just respect each personality.
강사 첨삭
~~Hi Kate, this is your first homework ever. And I appreciate you doing your homework and clarifying the question from the Korean managers.
~~If you haven\'t noticed, this question actually stirs your ideology and opinion about something. And I think I succeeded there because not only your opinion that I was able to bring out but also your behavior on how to respond on hypothetical questions.
~~I bet you deserve two thumbs up and that implies, amazing!
To be honest, I couldn\'t understand the topic at first,
>> CORRECT
OR>> To be honest with you, I couldn\'t understand the topic at first,
so I confirmed the topic by customer service center again. XD
>> so I confirmed the topic through the help of our Korean managers.
Well... actually, I would like to reject the comparison,
>> Well... actually, I would like to reject the idea of comparison,
because I think the comparison is just a see-saw or a scales.
>> because I think that comparison is like a see-saw or a scale.
Therefore I may feel inferior or superior than comparison target.
>> Therefore I may feel inferior or superior than the other one.
Why do we compare each other?
>> CORRECT
I don\'t want to do, and I just respect each personality.
>> I don\'t want to do that, and I just respect each one\'s personality.
~~If you haven\'t noticed, this question actually stirs your ideology and opinion about something. And I think I succeeded there because not only your opinion that I was able to bring out but also your behavior on how to respond on hypothetical questions.
~~I bet you deserve two thumbs up and that implies, amazing!
To be honest, I couldn\'t understand the topic at first,
>> CORRECT
OR>> To be honest with you, I couldn\'t understand the topic at first,
so I confirmed the topic by customer service center again. XD
>> so I confirmed the topic through the help of our Korean managers.
Well... actually, I would like to reject the comparison,
>> Well... actually, I would like to reject the idea of comparison,
because I think the comparison is just a see-saw or a scales.
>> because I think that comparison is like a see-saw or a scale.
Therefore I may feel inferior or superior than comparison target.
>> Therefore I may feel inferior or superior than the other one.
Why do we compare each other?
>> CORRECT
I don\'t want to do, and I just respect each personality.
>> I don\'t want to do that, and I just respect each one\'s personality.
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