Homework 1

When was the happiest time of your childhood? When i was a elemetary school student, FIFA world cup was hold by Korea/japan. Most of children enjoyed the soccer. Likewise i played the soccer with my class friends after school everyday. So we could be initimate each other through playing soccer. it made my body and mental healthy too. The reason why i remember my childhood happily.

Hi there my dear Sun, happy Monday! Thank you so much for the wonderful class awhile ago, I really had a gret time talking with you!By the way, I made some modifications on your composition my dear... You did a very good job... I hope you will keep up the good work. Don\'t wori I am always here to help you and I promise you that... Take care and have a great day ahead! xoxoTeacher Cam^^ When was the happiest time of your childhood?>>correctWhen i was a elemetary school student, FIFA world cup was hold by Korea/japan. >>When I was an elementary school student, FIFA Worlc cup was held in Korea and Japan.Most of children enjoyed the soccer. >>Most of the children enjoyed soccer. Likewise i played the soccer with my class friends after school everyday. >>Likewise, I play soccer with my class friends everyday after school.So we could be initimate each other through playing soccer. >>So we could have a better relationship through playing soccer. it made my body and mental healthy too. >>correct OR: I made both my body and mental health The reason why i remember my childhood happily. >>Those are the reasons why I feel happy remembering my childhood.