homework 1
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름],
I think almost everyone had gone through the rebelling stage during their teenage years. I understand how you feel about your mother because I felt the same when my father died three years ago. I have so many things I haven\'t told him that I wish I could but now it\'s too late. Have a great weekend and I\'ll see you again on Monday!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
When I was young, my father died early.
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So I lived with my mother without my father.
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I was very lonely and I always envied my friends.
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So I was very introversive and my mother and I were very poor.
>>So I was an introvert since my mother and I were very poor.
When I was teenager, I hated everything.
>>When I was a teenager, I hated everything.
However, I didn\'t know about my mother\'s situation.
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Maybe she was very lonely too and she had to decide everything alone.
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I guess she was tired.
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I can understand her now.
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I want to tell her I am sorry and I love you.
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But I can\'t tell her.
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She went to heaven a few years ago.
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I always missed her.
>>I always miss her.
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