Homework 1

Hi there, Jack!

It\'s great to see that you are finally doing your homework.

You did a good job here.

However, I would like you to take note of the proper capitalization and use the correct punctuation too.

Keep up the good work!

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~ ^^

Hellow, Marie

>> Hello, Marie!

*Use proper punctuation. ^^
 I\'m Jack

>> CORRECT!

>> I\'m Jack.

*Use proper punctuation. ^^
 I\'m afraid, I\'m doing my homework first

>> I\'m afraid it\'s my first time to do my homework.

*Use proper punctuation. ^^
 I\'ll be able to do it anyway
>> I\'m going to do it anyway.
 If i had more free time, First, I\'d like to go on a trip around the world.

>> If I had more free time, first, I\'d like to go on a trip around the world.

It\'s my hobby and I love it

>> CORRECT!

>> It\'s my hobby and I love it.

*Use proper punctuation. ^^
 Actually, I really want to travel in America

>> Actually, I really want to travel to America.

*Use proper punctuation. ^^
 Because i\'ve never been there.

>> CORRECT!

>> I\'ve 

*Take note of proper capitalization. ^^
 But I can\'t go there, Since I can\'t speak English well and i\'m scaring..

>> But I can\'t go there since I can\'t speak English well and I\'m scared.
 If i go on a trip there, I want to meet many people and I\'ll eat alot of food and I\'m going to go to the New York
>> If I go there, I want to meet many people and eat a lot of food. I\'m also going to go to New York.
Second, I want to meet my high school friends

>> CORRECT!

>> Second, I want to meet my high school friends.

*Use proper punctuation. ^^

and then I\'m going to drink alot alcohol and talk about our high school story

>> We\'re going to drink a lot of alcohol and reminisce about high school.
 I realized that would be fun.
>> CORRECT!
Third, I\'m going to study English hard so i want to speak it well
>> Third, I\'m going to study English hard because I want to speak English well.
This homework is harder than i thought..

>> This homework was harder than I thought.
 But I\'m trying to study English hard everyday

>> But I\'m trying to study English hard every day.
 Marie, See you tomorrow~

>> CORRECT!

OR:
>> See you tomorrow, Marie!

thank you,

>> CORRECT!

>> Thank you!

*Take note of proper capitalization. ^^

Good night

>> CORRECT!

>> Good night.

*Use proper punctuation. ^^