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This is house of Ho Chi Minh picture.
Ho Chi Minh is Leader of Vietnam in past.
In right picture, It is a building in front of the garden on the side of Ho Chi Minh\'s house.
And the left picture(from the top) is Ho Chi Min\'s tomb(Maybe.), at a veranda in a hotel restaurant and at Ho Chi Minh\'s tomb too.
Vietnam is a very butiful place.
The mango there is very delicious and the night view is wonderful.
I like vietnam so much!!!!
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This is house of Ho Chi Minh picture.
>> This is a picture of Ho Chi Minh\'s house.
Ho Chi Minh is Leader of Vietnam in past.
>> Ho Chi Minh was a leader of Vietnam in the past.
In right picture, It is a building in front of the garden on the side of Ho Chi Minh\'s house.
>> In the right picture, you can see a building in front of the garden on the side of Ho Chi Minh\'s house.
And the left picture(from the top) is Ho Chi Min\'s tomb(Maybe.), at a veranda in a hotel restaurant and at Ho Chi Minh\'s tomb too.
>> correct
Vietnam is a very butiful place.
>> Vietnam is a very beautiful place.
The mango there is very delicious and the night view is wonderful.
>> CORRECT
I like vietnam so much!!!!
>> I like Vietnam so much!
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