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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY:
How much of a problem is obesity in your country?
-I gauss.. It was!
Common foods are very oily and fried.
But These days ,many foods are changing a lot.
There are lots of places that sell fresh and raw food
강사 첨삭
Hello Marie
Thank you for your homework!!!
I do know that whenever we try to do our best, we will receive a harvest.
We just need to have faith in God and do our best effort in everything we do.
T. Jeny
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY:
How much of a problem is obesity in your country?
>>correct
-I gauss.. It was!
>>I guess, I agree.
Common foods are very oily and fried.
>>Our common dishes are very oily and fried.
But These days ,many foods are changing a lot.
>>These days, many foods are changing a lot.
There are lots of places that sell fresh and raw food
>>correct
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