Homework#1
학생이 쓴 원문
What one piece of advice would you offer to a newborn infant? Elaborate your answer.
ans) First of all , I want to say for infants that \"thank you for coming out of the world \"
The children are the future. So, it is the reason why i appreciate to you
Secondly, I hope that you grow up in good health. If you have a illness, you will be hard to live and can\'t do anything that you want in your future. That is the reason why you grow up in good health
Lastly, Enjoy your life. Life is the once. So, you do not regret your life. Please execute what you want to do in future.
If you will be doing what you want, that is enjoying your life.
Above the reasons, I want to say for infants
Thank you
강사 첨삭
Hello Jonathan!
I could tell that you have a soft heart for newly born babies.
You sound sweet in your message and you are so concern of them.
Thank you for sharing your warm and touchy advice.
Here are my corrections.
First of all , I want to say for infants that \"thank you for coming out of the world \"
>> First of all, I want to say to infants, \"Thank you for coming to this world.\"
The children are the future. So, it is the reason why I appreciate to you
>> The children are the future. So, this is the reason why I appreciate to you.
Secondly, I hope that you grow up in good health.
>> Correct!
If you have a illness, you will be hard to live and can\'t do anything that you want in your future.
>> If you have an illness, it will be hard to live and you can\'t do anything you want in your future.
That is the reason why you grow up in good health
>> That is the reason why you should grow up in good health.
Lastly, Enjoy your life. Life is the once. So, you do not regret your life.
>> Lastly, Enjoy your life. Life is only one. So, do not regret it.
Please execute what you want to do in future.
>> Please do what you want in the future.
If you will be doing what you want, that is enjoying your life.
>> If you will be doing what you want, you will be enjoying your life.
Above the reasons, I want to say for infants Thank you
>> Above all reasons, I want to say, \"Thank you.\"
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