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1.
I think there is many various activity sports in beach place.
And there is many convenient facilities.
So many people like the beach.
For me, I like to watch a boundless ocean when it\'s raining.
But I think sometimes people should think sea animals.
Currently, there is a lot of sea trash in the sea.
That is environmental pollution caused by humans.
Therefore, people should think it once more before they go to the beach.
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~Lucy
I think there is many various activity sports in beach place.
>>I think there are many various activity sports in the beach.
And there is many convenient facilities.
>>And there are many convenient facilities.
So many people like the beach.
>>CORRECT!
For me, I like to watch a boundless ocean when it\'s raining.
For me, I like to watch a boundless ocean when it\'s raining.
>>CORRECT!
But I think sometimes people should think sea animals.
But I think sometimes people should think sea animals.
>>CORRECT!
Currently, there is a lot of sea trash in the sea.
Currently, there is a lot of sea trash in the sea.
>>CORRECT!
That is environmental pollution caused by humans.
That is environmental pollution caused by humans.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, people should think it once more before they go to the beach.
Therefore, people should think it once more before they go to the beach.
>>CORRECT!
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