HOMEWORK: 1. Do you think it’s a good idea to allow children to have cell phones? I think having cel
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HOMEWORK:
1. Do you think it’s a good idea to allow children to have cell phones?
I think having cell phones is good idea. To allow children to have their own cell phones is free. We must think a good idea. We can allow use phone.
2. Do you think smoking should be allowed in public places?
Smoking in public places is . I think that allowing people to smoke in these places will. It’s a good idea . We must think of
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Hey there, Samuel. I appreciate the effort you\'re making in answering the homework and sharing your thoughts. I hope you keep it up. Have a happy Christmas! See you in our next class! ~Teacher Jane ^__^
1. Do you think it’s a good idea to allow children to have cell phones?
I think having cell phones is good idea.
>> I think having cell phones is a good idea.
To allow children to have their own cell phones is free.
>> CORRECT
We must think a good idea.
>> We must think of a good idea.
We can allow use phone.
>> We can allow the use of phones.
2. Do you think smoking should be allowed in public places?
Smoking in public places is .
>> Smoking in public places is bad.
I think that allowing people to smoke in these places will.
>> I think that allowing people to smoke in these places will harm others.
It’s a good idea .
>> It’s a good idea to stop smoking in public places.
We must think of
>> We must think of people’s health.
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