homework 10.03
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you think living near electricity power cables is dangerous?
Yes, I think living near electricity power cables is dangerous.
Electricity makes our lives comfortable, but it is sometimes dangerous.
Because electricity cables has high-voltage flows.
A lot of accidents makes because of high-voltage electricity.
So, in my country case high-voltage electrical cables move the installed under the ground.
And we can\\\'t make a building a near a telephone pole.
This ways also sometimes a problem, but it\\\'s safer than before ways
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you think living near electricity power cables is dangerous?
Yes, I think living near electricity power cables is dangerous.
Please answer the question:
Do you think living near electricity power cables is dangerous?
Yes, I think living near electricity power cables is dangerous.
>> CORRECT!
Electricity makes our lives comfortable, but it is sometimes dangerous.
>> CORRECT!
Because electricity cables has high-voltage flows.
>> It\'s because electricity cables have high-voltage flows.
A lot of accidents makes because of high-voltage electricity.
>> A lot of accidents occur because of high-voltage electricity.
So, in my country case high-voltage electrical cables move the installed under the ground.
>> So, in my country\'s case, high-voltage electric cables are installed under the ground.
And we can\\\'t make a building a near a telephone pole.
>> And we can\'t make a building a near a telephone pole.
This ways also sometimes a problem, but it\\\'s safer than before ways
>> These ways are also sometimes a problem, but it\'s safer than before.
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