Homework {10/05}

2020-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Theme: Make a sentence using the words below. 1. I want to make a multipurpose bag. 2. I don\'t know what opportunity means. 3. Grab the Songpyeon! It tastes very good! 4. Elsa\'s role in Frozen 2 is to found the misterious voice. 5. I have musical instruments that are very small and cute.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for sending your homework, Clair!

Cheers,
Jean~~

Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. I want to make a multipurpose bag.
>> correct~~

2. I don\'t know what opportunity means.
>> [ An Opportunity is a situation or condition that makes it possible to do something, like a good chance to succeed in doing something for advancement or success. ]
>> Example: I am your English teacher and I will recommend that you join my English group class that is composed of 5 international students that have similar age as you. This is a good opportunity for you to practice your conversation skills with foreigners. 

3. Grab the Songpyeon! It tastes very good!
>> correct~~
>> or: Grab the songpyeon! It\'s chewy and tasty! 

4. Elsa\'s role in Frozen 2 is to found the misterious voice.
>> Elsa\'s role in Frozen 2 is to find the mysterious voice.

5. I have musical instruments that are very small and cute.
>> correct~~

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