Homework [10/06}
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below including the conjunctions but, also, etc.
1. I learned to love doctors after watching , but I still love nurses too.
2. There\'s no need to proof that you didn\'t bullied him. Also, you don\'t need to proof that you didn\'t bring your homework.
3. There\'s an evidence that she did bullied him. However, she doesn\'t says she did bullied him.
4. Dinosaurs existed in Earth millions of years ago, and they ate meat or vegetables.
5. There are no person like Harry Potter or Ron Weasely in real life.
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Theme: Make a sentence using the words below including the conjunctions but, also, etc.
1. I learned to love doctors after watching , but I still love nurses too.
>> Your sentence is incomplete. I mean, \"after watching\" what?
>>> example: I learned to love doctors after watching the hit American medical drama television series called House, but I still love nurses too.
2. There\'s no need to proof that you didn\'t bullied him. Also, you don\'t need to proof that you didn\'t bring your homework.
>> There\'s no proof that you didn\'t bully him. Also, you don\'t need to prove that you didn\'t bring your homework.
3. There\'s an evidence that she did bullied him. However, she doesn\'t say she did bullied him.
>> There\'s evidence that she did bully him. However, she doesn\'t admit that she did the act.
4. Dinosaurs existed in Earth millions of years ago, and they ate meat or vegetables.
>> Dinosaurs existed on Earth millions of years ago, and they ate meat or vegetables.
5. There are no person like Harry Potter or Ron Weasely in real life.
>> There is no person like Harry Potter or Ron Weasley in real life.
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