Homework {10/09}

2020-10-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

Theme: Make a sentence using the words below. 1. He is very distract. 2. Wolves come out during the night time. 3. I invanted protein milk and It tastes like bluebarry. 4. Elephant\'s poop is great source of papers. 5. I want to be a nutritionist and plean the student\'s lunch.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Clair!

Thanks once again for sending your homework! Do enjoy the weekend and catch you next week!

Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. He is very distract.
>>  He is very distracted. 

2. Wolves come out during the night time.
>>  Wolves come out during nighttime.

3. I invanted protein milk and It tastes like bluebarry.
>> I invented protein milk and it tastes like blueberry.
>> or: I invented a blueberry protein milkshake. 

4. Elephant\'s poop is great source of papers.
>> Elephant dung is a great source of paper. 

5. I want to be a nutritionist and plean the student\'s lunch.
>> I want to be a nutritionist and plan the students\' lunch.

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