HOMEWORK 10/1, positive change

Dear [Name].

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Thanks for you advising.
>>Thank you for your advise.
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1. My most positive change is familyish style fist of all.

>>The greatest positive changed in my life is my family.
I thought that work is a priority over home even just 10 years ago.

>>Ten years ago, I thought work is more imporatnt than home.
When I was often lately coming home due to work and alcohol,

>>I often come home late due to work and alcohol.
I didn\'t know well the reason of my wife\'s nagging, and did not effort to see why.
>>I didn\'t know the reason why my wife is nagging and I didn\'t to anything to see why.
What a stupid idea !

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I was gradually changing by meeting the good neighbors, Home is a top priority now.
>>I gradually changed when I met our good neighbors. I realized that family should be our top proiority.

2. Next is the change in the consciousness for the country.

>>The next thing is, I became conscious of my country.
About the modern history of korea I learned in student time.

>>When I was a student, I learned about modern history.
I knowed it was a false history distorted by traitor politicians (pro-Japanese).

>>I knew that there were politicians, who were traitors.
Except former president YS(Kim Young Sam) and DJ(Kim Dae Joong),

>>Except our former president YS(Kim Young Sam) and DJ(Kim Dae Joong),
All president was pro-Japanese. and current president is also
descendants of pro-Japanese.

>>All presidents were pro-Japanese and our current president is also a descendant.

I envy of treatment for the Nazi in Germany.

>>I envy the treatment of the Nazi in Germany.

Previously, I was close to the blind patriots.

>>I was previously closed to the blind patriots.

But not now, And I will not change this for our country until my death.

>>I am not a changed person I will support my country for the rest of my life.