homework 10.10
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the advantages and disadvantages of buying products in a thrift store?
Oh, I misunderstood that \" Thrift store\" means.
Fortunately, I now understand it means.
Anyway I have never bought anything in the third store.
Instead, I often trade used goods between individuals.
In my opinion, used trading community and application are well developed in my country.
I often digging for items what I want secondhand items or I want sell items using to trading apps.
This kinds of trading also has pros and cons.
I think the pros is that I can get items low price or sell the items to easily.
But, It\'s has a fatal disadvantages.
Sometimes bad people cheat on other people.
Typical fraudulent ways, they receive the money and disappearing, or cheating on problems in items.
Fortunately, I have never experienced it.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the advantages and disadvantages of buying products in a thrift store?
Oh, I misunderstood that \" Thrift store\" means.
Please answer the question:
What are the advantages and disadvantages of buying products in a thrift store?
Oh, I misunderstood that \" Thrift store\" means.
>> Oh, I misunderstood what \" Thrift store\" means.
Fortunately, I now understand it means.
>> Fortunately, I now understand what it means.
Anyway I have never bought anything in the third store.
>> Anyway I have never bought anything in the thrift store.
Instead, I often trade used goods between individuals.
>> CORRECT!
In my opinion, used trading community and application are well developed in my country.
>> CORRECT!
I often digging for items what I want secondhand items or I want sell items using to trading apps.
>> I often dig for items that I want, either secondhand items or not; I also sell items using the trading apps.
This kinds of trading also has pros and cons.
>> This kind of trading also has pros and cons.
I think the pros is that I can get items low price or sell the items to easily.
>> I think the pros is that I can get items at a low price or sell the items easily.
But, It\'s has a fatal disadvantages.
>> But, It\'s has fatal disadvantages.
Sometimes bad people cheat on other people.
>> CORRECT!
Typical fraudulent ways, they receive the money and disappearing, or cheating on problems in items.>> These are typical fraudulent ways; they receive money and then disappear, or cheat about problems on items.
Fortunately, I have never experienced it.
>> CORRECT!
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