Homework 10/10
학생이 쓴 원문
What adventures would you like to go on in the future? Expand your answer.
Some like to challenge and enjoy adventures, in other hands, others prefer to live stably.
I think all people don't need to like adventure.
If someone ask me how much I like adventures, then I would say "I don't like adventures and prefer to be stable instinctively."
All of adventures or challenges I have experienced were painful and meant a competition.
Nevertheless, I always look for something that is worthy for me to try challenge.
Because I also know that new experience have grown me up and led me for now.
So I would add these comments in the former my answer. "But I'm ready to whatever I encounter and I'll do my best to next adventures"
And it would be better if I get rich and honors by next adventures!
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Ian!
Some like to challenge and enjoy adventures, in other hands, others prefer to live stably.
How are you doing?
Are you having a good Wednesday?
Good job in doing your homework.
I will see you later;
~ T. Lorna^^
Some like to challenge and enjoy adventures, in other hands, others prefer to live stably.
>> Some like to challenge and enjoy adventures, on the other hand, others prefer to live stably.
I think all people don\'t need to like adventure.
I think all people don\'t need to like adventure.
>> Correct!
If someone ask me how much I like adventures, then I would say \"I don\'t like adventures and prefer to be stable instinctively.\"
If someone ask me how much I like adventures, then I would say \"I don\'t like adventures and prefer to be stable instinctively.\"
>> If someone ask me how much I like adventures, then I would say, \"I don\'t like adventures but I prefer to be stable instinctively.\"
All of adventures or challenges I have experienced were painful and meant a competition.
All of adventures or challenges I have experienced were painful and meant a competition.
>> All adventures or challenges that I have experienced were painful and meant a competition.
Nevertheless, I always look for something that is worthy for me to try challenge.
Nevertheless, I always look for something that is worthy for me to try challenge.
>> Nevertheless, I always look for something that is worthy for me to try as a challenge.
Because I also know that new experience have grown me up and led me for now.
Because I also know that new experience have grown me up and led me for now.
>> Because I also know that experiences have grown me up and led me for who am I now.
So I would add these comments in the former my answer. \"But I\'m ready to whatever I encounter and I\'ll do my best to next adventures\"
>> Therefore I can also say that I am ready to whatever challenges I might encounter and I will do my best for it.
And it would be better if I get rich and honors by next adventures!
And it would be better if I get rich and honors by next adventures!
>> I think it would be better if I will get rich and be honored for my next adventures!
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