Homework 10/11
학생이 쓴 원문
"Better late than never."
I know how many people already agree with this sentence.
Because the people including me know that our life is marathon without the loser.
Someone said, "The important thing is not the speed, but the direction."
Like his comment, we don't need to be fast, but just keep the course.
One of Japanese marathon players who participated in Olympic was going to take a rest in someone's home for just a minute but fell asleep.
And when he woke up, the result was that he gave up the game.
50 years later, he can try to make a challenge again from the point that he gave up and he can make it.
So the official record of "the longest marathon" is 54years 8month by him.
Nobody blame him or pull a trick on him, but just give him applauds.
I think this is the best story to explain this sentence.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Ian!!:)
Good job in doing your homework .
I hope that you are having a great time right now.
I will see you on Monday.
~T. Lorna^^
I know how many people already agree with this sentence.
>> I know that many people agrees with this sentence.
Because the people including me know that our life is marathon without the loser.
>> Because people including me know that our life is a marathon without a loser. (Huh?)
Someone said, \"The important thing is not the speed, but the direction.\"
>> Someone said that, \"The important thing is not the speed, but the direction.\"
Like his comment, we don\'t need to be fast, but just keep the course.
>> Correct!
One of Japanese marathon players who participated in Olympic was going to take a rest in someone\'s home for just a minute but fell asleep.
>> One of the Japanese marathon players who participated in the Olympic games went to take a rest in someone\'s home for just a minute but he fell asleep.
And when he woke up, the result was that he gave up the game.
>> When he woke up, the result was that he gave up the game.
50 years later, he can try to make a challenge again from the point that he gave up and he can make it.
>> 50 years later, he tried the challenge again from the point that he gave up and he made it.
So the official record of \"the longest marathon\" is 54years 8month by him.
>> So the official record of \"the longest marathon\" is a 54 years 8 months old man which is him.
Nobody blame him or pull a trick on him, but just give him applauds.
>> Nobody blamed him or pulled a trick on him but they just gave him applauds.
I think this is the best story to explain this sentence.
>> Correct!
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