Homework 10.12
학생이 쓴 원문
Described an experience/ project or some work that you did with others as a member of team.
: Just 1 week ago, I had a presentation with my teams. Our team has three members. And we had prepared this project over 3 weeks ago. It was fun and useful for me. But there is one friend who didn\'t appear in online meeting time. We were very tired to wait her. But, she had done her works well so we could finish the presentation successfully.
강사 첨삭
1. Just 1 week ago, I had a presentation with my teams.
>>Just a week ago, I had a presentation with my team.
2. Our team has three members.
>>CORRECT
OR>>We are three in the team.
3. And we had prepared this project over 3 weeks ago.
>>CORRECT
OR>>And we started to prepare for this project three weeks ago.
4. It was fun and useful for me.
>>CORRECT
OR>>It was fun and beneficial to me.
5. But there is one friend who didn\'t appear in online meeting time.
>>But there is one friend who didn\'t appear in an online meeting time.
6. We were very tired to wait her.
>>We were very tired of waiting for her.
7. But, she had done her works well so we could finish the presentation successfully.
>>But, she had done her work well so we could finish the presentation successfully.
Very good, Michelle!
- T. Melody^^
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