Homework 10/13
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Have a stress-free Monday Ian!
Thanks for dropping by the board! Your composition is an eye-opening for me. You have a good point! We are all busy striving hard to earn money but we forget the most important part is to be able to set a goal and achieve it, no matter how long it takes. Keep your ideas flowing!
See you!
~T. Eunice
What are you craving for at this very moment? Why?
>> Correct!
I\'m craving for playing and drinking with my friends all
day.
>> I\'m craving for something to drink with my friends all
day.
And I\'m eager to take a rest, to buy anything I want and
meet my favorite singer.
>> I\'m eager to take a rest, buy everything I want and
meet my favorite singer.
Like this, there are numerous things that I want to do or
have in the world.
>> There are numerous things that I want to do or have in
this world.
But we knows that what I have is limited and I cannot do
all and cannot have everything.
>> But I know that what I have is limited and I cannot do and
have everything I want.
We all know about that truth and that\'s the reason why we
are carving for doing.
>> We all know about that truth and that\'s the reason why
we are craving to achieve everything in life.
The best thing that I\'m really craving for is to have an
impossible dream, even though it\'s hard and doesn\'t make
sense.
>> The best thing that I\'m really craving for is to
achieve an impossible dream, even though it\'s out of
context and doesn\'t make sense.
There are a lot of people who live without their thoughts
and philosophies.
>> Correct!
But in my case, I think that my goal have led me, grown
me up for now.
>> But in my case, I think that my goal in life has led me
to be a grown up man.
My goal and dream decide my next action and plan.
>> My goals and dreams help me decide my next action and
plan in life.
And now, my goal is to have a conversation with global
people and expand my thoughts through those experiences.
>> And now, my goal is to be able to converse with various
people and expand my thoughts through those experiences.
This goal made me learn about English and go abroad all
time.
>> This goal made me learn more about English and travel
abroad all the time.
Thank you for reading my composition!have a nice
weekend.teacher
>> Thank you for reading my composition! Have a nice
weekend teacher.
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