HOMEWORK 10/13, Active or passive voice
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Oh!!!
I would like to thank you for your kindness. It is really an advantage on my part you being my student. I am truly bless!!!
Again, thank you for your homework. I do know that you can reach the goals that you\'ve been dreaming of to achieve. I know that you do have potentials in improving your skills, so focus the corrections that I\'m giving in our daily class.
You can make a difference!!!
T. Jeny
Dear [Name].
>>correct
I called the manager(woman) about my 3 decades anniversary.
>>I called the manager about my 30th wedding anniversary.
I must absent at 23th and 26th Oct because of my traveling.
>>I must absent myself on the 23rd and 26th of October because of my vacation.
I asked her to be treated as absent, not as adjournment.
>>I asked her to treat it as absent, not as adjournment.
Iheard that it is more advantageous for your tuition fee.
>>I heard that it is an advantage on your part.
I hope you are not disadvantaged because of my situation.
>>I hope that you\'ll not be affected with my situation.
Thanks to you also today.
>>I would also like to thank you for today\'s class.
== body ==
1. The work Has been completed by me.
>>correct
2. The patient is looked after by the nurse.
>>The patient is being looked after by the nurse.
3. My pen was stolen by somebody yesterday.
>>correct
4. The sparrows have been feeding by the old woman.
>>The sparrows were being fed by the old woman.
5. The committee has adopted an unrealistic policy.
>>correct
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