HOMEWORK 10/13, Active or passive voice

2015-10-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name]. I called the manager(woman) about my 3 decades anniversary. I must absent at 23th and 26th Oct because of my traveling. I asked her to be treated as absent, not as adjournment. I heard that it is more advantageous for your tuition fee. I hope you are not disadvantaged because of my situation. Thanks to you also today. == body == 1. The work Has been completed by me. 2. The patient is looked after by the nurse. 3. My pen was stolen by somebody yesterday. 4. The sparrows have been feeding by the old woman. 5. The committee has adopted an unrealistic policy.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh!!!

I would like to thank you for your kindness. It is really an advantage on my part you being my student. I am truly bless!!!

Again, thank you for your homework. I do know that you can reach the goals that you\'ve been dreaming of to achieve. I know that you do have potentials in improving your skills, so focus the corrections that I\'m giving in our daily class.

You can make a difference!!!

T. Jeny

Dear [Name].

>>correct
I called the manager(woman) about my 3 decades anniversary.

>>I called the manager about my 30th wedding anniversary.
I must absent at 23th and 26th Oct because of my traveling.

>>I must absent myself on the 23rd and 26th of October because of my vacation.
I asked her to be treated as absent, not as adjournment.

>>I asked her to treat it as absent, not as adjournment.
Iheard that it is more advantageous for your tuition fee.

>>I heard that it is an advantage on your part.
I hope you are not disadvantaged because of my situation.

>>I hope that you\'ll not be affected with my situation.
Thanks to you also today.
>>I would also like to thank you for today\'s class.
== body ==
1. The work Has been completed by me.
>>correct
2. The patient is looked after by the nurse.
>>The patient is being looked after by the nurse.
3. My pen was stolen by somebody yesterday.
>>correct
4. The sparrows have been feeding by the old woman.
>>The sparrows were being fed by the old woman.
5. The committee has adopted an unrealistic policy.

>>correct

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