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2024-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jewel

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What’s the biggest health challenge you’ve faced, and how did you overcome it? I have been experienced various health problems. The biggest health challenge was that I couldn’t eat almost food except for water. I hated every food’s smell. I couldn’t endure When I smelled some foods. So I went to hospital, but the doctor said that he didn’t know any reason. He also gave me the prescribtion. I felt so hard to walk. But I had medicine streadily. I just spent time as it flows. Maybe becouse of it, I getting better. Sometimes, time is the best medicine.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Stella! I’m glad you’ve recovered from this condition. I hope you stay healthy always. Thank you for sharing your story. Have a great day ahead! ^^

~T. Jewel

I have been experienced various health problems.

>>I have experienced various health problems.
The biggest health challenge was that I couldn’t eat almost food except for water.

>>The biggest health challenge was that I couldn’t eat any food and could only drink water.
I hated every food’s smell.

>>I hated the smell of every food.
I couldn’t endure When I smelled some foods.

>>I couldn’t endure the smell of certain foods.
So I went to hospital, but the doctor said that he didn’t know any reason.

>>So I went to the hospital, but the doctor didn\'t know the reason.
He also gave me the prescribtion.

>>He also gave me a prescription.
I felt so hard to walk.

>>I found it very difficult to walk.
But I had medicine streadily.

>>But I took the medicine regularly.
I just spent time as it flows.

>>I just let time pass by.
Maybe becouse of it, I getting better.

>>Maybe because of that, I got better.
Sometimes, time is the best medicine.

>>CORRECT

>>Time is often the best healer.

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