Homework {10/16}

2020-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

Theme: Make a sentence using the words below. 1. My niece is very good at cooking tosts. 2. My friend\'s sister have a pine-tree trauma. 3. I have five dozens of eggs and I will use it for cooking scrumbled eggs. 4. One tray has thirty eggs. 5. I like easter egg hunting event.

강사 첨삭

Hi Clair!

Here\'s your edited homework! 

Cheers,
Jean~~

Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. My niece is very good at cooking tosts.
>> My niece is very good at making toasts. 
>> or: My niece makes excellent toasts. 

2. My friend\'s sister have a pine-tree trauma.
>> My friend\'s sister has a pine-tree trauma.
>> or: My friend\'s sister suffers from a pine-tree trauma. 
>> [Let\'s talk about this \'pine-tree trauma\' in our class.^^]

3. I have five dozens of eggs and I will use it for cooking scrumbled eggs.
>> I have five dozens of eggs and will use it for cooking scrambled eggs.

4. One tray has thirty eggs.
>> correct
>> or: One tray consists of 30 eggs. 

5. I like easter egg hunting event.
>>  I enjoy Easter egg hunting events.

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