homework 10.16
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What test has made you most nervous?
I have not yet experienced many kinds of tests.
However, some tests made me nervous.
One of them is the I think most nervous test is go to university(Korea SAT).
When I was in high school student, I took first Korea SAT test to go to university, but I failed.
So, I retried the test again.
Finally, I entered university one year later than other people.
The reason why those test is more nervous is that it is only once a year.
It\'s more nervous test because we take the test only one day a year.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
The reason why those test is more nervous is that it is only once a year.
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What test has made you most nervous?
I have not yet experienced many kinds of tests.
Please answer the question:
What test has made you most nervous?
I have not yet experienced many kinds of tests.
>> CORRECT!
However, some tests made me nervous.>> CORRECT!
One of them is the I think most nervous test is go to university(Korea SAT).>> I think one of them that made me most nervous is the university test (Korea SAT).
When I was in high school student, I took first Korea SAT test to go to university, but I failed.
>> When I was in high school, I took the first Korea SAT test to go to the university, but I failed.
So, I retried the test again.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> So, I retook the test.
Finally, I entered university one year later than other people.
>> CORRECT!
>> The reason why that test makes people nervous is that it only happens once a year.
It\'s more nervous test because we take the test only one day a year.
>> What makes it more nerve-wrecking is that the test only happens one day in one year.
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