Homework 10.17
학생이 쓴 원문
Describe a dinner you really enjoyed.
: After doing my online English class, eating steak that my mom roasted is my favorite dinner. I really like to eat meat, especially steak and pork meat. But after I heard that eating meat is not good at environment, I decided to reduce to eat meat.
강사 첨삭
1. After doing my online English class, eating steak that my mom roasted is my favorite dinner.
>>CORRECT
OR>>My favorite dinner is the steak that my mom roasted, and I have it after my online English class.
2. I really like to eat meat, especially steak and pork meat.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I really like eating meat, especially steak and pork.
3. But after I heard that eating meat is not good at environment, I decided to reduce to eat meat.
>>But after I heard that eating meat is not good for the environment, I decided to reduce eating meat.
Very good, Michelle!
- T. Melody ^^
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