homework 10.18
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the common causes of road accidents in your country?
A common accident is a crash between cars.
Many of the cause of this kinds accident are over speeding and drowsy driving.
I often saw these road accidents when I drive the car.
Some people are over speeding like crazy or some people don\'t know sleeping while driving.
As a result, the road accident\'s probability is increases.
It\'s simple to prevent accidents.
Do not over speeding and not driving dangerously.
But, it\'s a problem because there are many people don\'t follow the simple things.
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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the common causes of road accidents in your country?
A common accident is a crash between cars.
Please answer the question:
What are the common causes of road accidents in your country?
A common accident is a crash between cars.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> One of the common road accidents is car collision.
Many of the cause of this kinds accident are over speeding and drowsy driving.
>> Some of the causes of these accidents are over speeding and drowsy driving.
I often saw these road accidents when I drive the car.>> I often see these road accidents when I drive the car.
Some people are over speeding like crazy or some people don\'t know sleeping while driving.
>> Some people are over speeding like crazy or some people don\'t know they\'re falling asleep while driving.
As a result, the road accident\'s probability is increases.
>> As a result, the road accident\'s probability increases.
It\'s simple to prevent accidents.
>> CORRECT!
Do not over speeding and not driving dangerously.>> Do not over speed or drive dangerously.
But, it\'s a problem because there are many people don\'t follow the simple things.
>> But, it\'s a problem because there are many people who don\'t follow the simple things.
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