Homework {10/19}
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. I have lots of recent photos of J.K.Rowling.
2. Recent photo means the latest photo.
3. I voluntary apply for class president
4. I don\'t go to school today because today is independent\'s day.
5. There are many parenting words and I think it\'s not good.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your edited homework, Clair!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. I have lots of recent photos of J.K.Rowling.
>> correct
>> or: I collected the most recent photos of of J.K.Rowling.
2. Recent photo means the latest photo.
>> correct
3. I voluntary apply for class president
>> My application for class presidency was voluntary.
4. I don\'t go to school today because today is independent\'s day.
>> I didn\'t go to school because today is Independence Day. This is the day when Koreans became independent from Japan.
5. There are many parenting words and I think it\'s not good.
>> or: Suzy\'s good parenting is one of the reasons why Clair grew up into a bright and wonderful child.
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