Homework 10/19
학생이 쓴 원문
"Easy come, easy go."
This is the starting lyrics in Grenade of Bruno Mars.
Anyway, somebody might say it's false, but I think this is absolutely right.
For example, I heard of a lot of news that the people who won lotteries in TV.
They would been happy and did what they wanted ever at first.
And eventually, most lost their money and fell into debt, in serious cases, chose to kill themselves.
This is what I know and a result of the money that came easily.
And I also saw opposite side situation, especially when it comes to a few people who could maintain their properties and money.
As if they expect this situation and prepare it, they never exaggerate their abilities and say loudly.
And they try to be humble and study how to manage it with a professional.
Even though money went to them easily, never go from them easily.
In any cases, there is nothing that I can maintain without any efforts.
강사 첨삭
TGIF, Ian!!:)
How are you doing today?
I hope that everything is alright with you today.
You are always on time in doing your homework.
Very good in that!!
I will see you later.
~ T. Lorna^-^
>> This is the starting lyrics in the song \'Grenade\' of Bruno Mars.
Anyway, somebody might say it\'s false, but I think this is absolutely right.
Anyway, somebody might say it\'s false, but I think this is absolutely right.
>> Correct!
For example, I heard of a lot of news that the people who won lotteries in TV.
For example, I heard of a lot of news that the people who won lotteries in TV.
>> For example, I heard a lot of news from TV about people who won lotteries.
They would been happy and did what they wanted ever at first.
They would been happy and did what they wanted ever at first.
>> They would have been happy and did what they wanted ever at first.
And eventually, most lost their money and fell into debt, in serious cases, chose to kill themselves.
And eventually, most lost their money and fell into debt, in serious cases, chose to kill themselves.
>> Eventually, most of them lost their money and fell into debt and some even chose to kill themselves.
This is what I know and a result of the money that came easily.
This is what I know and a result of the money that came easily.
>> This is the result of the money that comes easily.
And I also saw opposite side situation, especially when it comes to a few people who could maintain their properties and money.
And I also saw opposite side situation, especially when it comes to a few people who could maintain their properties and money.
>> Moreover, I also saw an opposite side of this situation, especially when it comes to a few people who could maintain their properties and money.
As if they expect this situation and prepare it, they never exaggerate their abilities and say loudly.
As if they expect this situation and prepare it, they never exaggerate their abilities and say loudly.
>> It seems like they anticipate this kind of situation and they never try to swagger around.
And they try to be humble and study how to manage it with a professional.
>> They try to stay humble and study how to manage it with a professional.
Even though money went to them easily, never go from them easily.
Even though money went to them easily, never go from them easily.
>> Therefore even though they earn the money in an easy way, they can never let it go that way.
In any cases, there is nothing that I can maintain without any efforts.
In any cases, there is nothing that I can maintain without any efforts.
>> I therefore conclude that, there is nothing that we can maintain without putting any efforts.
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