Homework 10/2
학생이 쓴 원문
Did you study a foreign language in school? Was it taught well?
Anyone who attended school in Korea learned about English for 9 years.
We even studied English hard, because English subject is one of most important subjects.
Moreover to pass a university or a company, I should get a high score of TOEIC or something like English exam score.
However, there are a lot of people who cannot speak just a sentence in English in front of foreigners.
Though I have seen even the student who has highest score of TOEIC hesitating to treat foreigner, I don't think that ordinary Korean isn't good at English.
Because almost Koreans learned about English grammar, so they are good at especially reading part.
The biggest problem, I think, is that almost people afraid to use English.
The things that we learned about in the school were to complete a sentence and to fix a wrong grammar in that sentence.
So, Korean are afraid to speak wrong and That's the reason why Korean are not familiar with English.
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>> Anyone who attended school in Korea would have learned English for 9 years.
We even studied English hard, because English subject is one of most important subjects.
We even studied English hard, because English subject is one of most important subjects.
>> We even studied English hard because English subject is one of the most important subjects.
Moreover to pass a university or a company, I should get a high score of TOEIC or something like English exam score.
Moreover to pass a university or a company, I should get a high score of TOEIC or something like English exam score.
>> Moreover, for me to enter a university or a company then I should get a high score in TOEIC or in any other English exams.
However, there are a lot of people who cannot speak just a sentence in English in front of foreigners.
However, there are a lot of people who cannot speak just a sentence in English in front of foreigners.
>> However, there are a lot of people who cannot speak even a sentence using English in front of foreigners.
Though I have seen even the student who has highest score of TOEIC hesitating to treat foreigner, I don\'t think that ordinary Korean isn\'t good at English.
Though I have seen even the student who has highest score of TOEIC hesitating to treat foreigner, I don\'t think that ordinary Korean isn\'t good at English.
>> I have seen even a student who had a high score in TOEIC but he hesitated to converse with a foreigner. I believe that the average Korean is good at English.
Because almost Koreans learned about English grammar, so they are good at especially reading part.
Because almost Koreans learned about English grammar, so they are good at especially reading part.
>> Because most Koreans learn English grammar so I believe they are good at English specially reading.
The biggest problem, I think, is that almost people afraid to use English.
The biggest problem, I think, is that almost people afraid to use English.
>> The biggest problem I think is that almost all people are afraid to use the language.
The things that we learned about in the school were to complete a sentence and to fix a wrong grammar in that sentence.
The things that we learned about in the school were to complete a sentence and to fix a wrong grammar in that sentence.
>> The things that we learned in the school were to complete a sentence and to fix the grammatical errors of the sentence.
So, Korean are afraid to speak wrong and That\'s the reason why Korean are not familiar with English.
So, Korean are afraid to speak wrong and That\'s the reason why Korean are not familiar with English.
>> So, this is the reason why Koreans aren\'t familiar with the language because they don\'t want to commit errors while speaking the language.
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