HOMEWORK 10/2,Completing sentences

Hello Oh!!!

Thank you for the information....I love watching firework dispalys.

I guess you and your family had a wonderful time together.

Thank you for your homework and you do hope that you are learning a lot of things .

T. Jeny

Dear [Name].

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MY wife and I will go to watch Seoul international Fireworks Festival tomorrow.

>>My wife and I will go and watch Seoul international Fireworks Festival tomorrow.
It is held each fall at the Han River as annual event.
>>It is annually held at Han River as an annual event.
The event participant countries are the United States, South Korea, and Philippines.

>>the participating countries are the United States, South Korea and the Philippines.
The crowd is about 1,000,000 persons.

>>The crowd was about 1,000,000 people.
It performs a fantastic show with the magnificent and beautiful music from 15 to 35 minutes in each country.
>>The show was fantastic with magnificent and beautiful music being played from 15 to 35 minutes for each country.
I want to introduce you the Philippine\'s schedule

>>I want to introduce to you the Philippine\'s schedule
- company : Dragon Fireworks
- theme : against the world
- running time : 15 mins
- Background music

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Lupin:Kara , Noypi : Bamboo , Elesi : Rivermaya ,
Kisapmata : Rivermaya, Fire : 2NE1, STOP : David Guetta Feat. Ryan Tedder, Sweet Escape : Alesso Feat. Sirena, Love Never Felt So Good (Fedde Le Grand Remix), Michael Jackson and Justin Timberlake, Runaway (U & I) : Galantis , Calling (Lose My Mind) : Sebastian Ingrosso and Alesso Feat. Ryan Tedder..

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I can\'t do my homework owing to character excess. sorry!
>>I can\'t do my homework owing to character exhaustion, sorry!
TGIF, teacher

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