Homework 10/20
학생이 쓴 원문
1. equivalent
Everyone's values are given from nature, which means that its are equivalent.
2. extremely
Even though it is good for us to believe any religion, we should warn that it's going extremely, like ISIS.
3. mannerism
Sometimes, mannerism that nobody cares makes disaster.
4. sufficient
It's impossible for us to be sufficient all the time, so we should fill a shortage up with sufficient practices.
5. assassinate
Even if I assassinate Kim-Jungeun, I'm so skeptical that it will be united between North and South Korea.
6. counterfeit
In movie "Catch me if you can", DiCaprio counterfeited a numerous mount of money.
7. approximate
Whenever I use the word "approximately", I use "roughly" or "about" instead of that because I'm confused with "appropriately".
8. controversial
Democracy is usually controversial and noisy. That's the reason why democracy could progressed for now.
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1. equivalent
Everyone\'s values are given from nature, which means that its are equivalent.
>> Everyone\'s values are given from nature which means that each are equivalent with each other.
2. extremely
Even though it is good for us to believe any religion, we should warn that it\'s going extremely, like ISIS.
>> Even though it is good for us to believe any religion, we should also warn ourselves that some are going extremely, like ISIS.
3. mannerism
Sometimes, mannerism that nobody cares makes disaster.
>> Correct!
4. sufficient
It\'s impossible for us to be sufficient all the time, so we should fill a shortage up with sufficient practices.
>> It\'s impossible for us to be sufficient all the time that we should fill a shortage with sufficient practices.
5. assassinate
Even if I assassinate Kim-Jungeun, I\'m so skeptical that it will be united between North and South Korea.
>> Even if I assassinate Kim-Jungeun, I\'m still skeptical that we will be united with North Korea.
6. counterfeit
In movie \"Catch me if you can\", DiCaprio counterfeited a numerous mount of money.
>> In the movie \"Catch me if you can\", DiCaprio counterfeited a numerous amount of money.
7. approximate
Whenever I use the word \"approximately\", I use \"roughly\" or \"about\" instead of that because I\'m confused with \"appropriately\".
>> Whenever I use the word \"approximately\", I use \"roughly\" or \"about\" instead of using it because I\'m confused with the word \"appropriately\".
8. controversial
Democracy is usually controversial and noisy. That\'s the reason why democracy could progressed for now.
>> Democracy is usually controversial and noisy. That\'s the reason why democracy is progressing now.
Everyone\'s values are given from nature, which means that its are equivalent.
>> Everyone\'s values are given from nature which means that each are equivalent with each other.
2. extremely
Even though it is good for us to believe any religion, we should warn that it\'s going extremely, like ISIS.
>> Even though it is good for us to believe any religion, we should also warn ourselves that some are going extremely, like ISIS.
3. mannerism
Sometimes, mannerism that nobody cares makes disaster.
>> Correct!
4. sufficient
It\'s impossible for us to be sufficient all the time, so we should fill a shortage up with sufficient practices.
>> It\'s impossible for us to be sufficient all the time that we should fill a shortage with sufficient practices.
5. assassinate
Even if I assassinate Kim-Jungeun, I\'m so skeptical that it will be united between North and South Korea.
>> Even if I assassinate Kim-Jungeun, I\'m still skeptical that we will be united with North Korea.
6. counterfeit
In movie \"Catch me if you can\", DiCaprio counterfeited a numerous mount of money.
>> In the movie \"Catch me if you can\", DiCaprio counterfeited a numerous amount of money.
7. approximate
Whenever I use the word \"approximately\", I use \"roughly\" or \"about\" instead of that because I\'m confused with \"appropriately\".
>> Whenever I use the word \"approximately\", I use \"roughly\" or \"about\" instead of using it because I\'m confused with the word \"appropriately\".
8. controversial
Democracy is usually controversial and noisy. That\'s the reason why democracy could progressed for now.
>> Democracy is usually controversial and noisy. That\'s the reason why democracy is progressing now.
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