Homework {10/21}
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. I don\'t save tooth decay!
2. I want to chew lots of foods.
3. I don\'t like plaque because it looks yucky.
4. Flossing is very important for my tooth.
5. I want to be a dentist!
강사 첨삭
Here\'s another edited homework, Clair!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.
1. I don\'t save tooth decay!
>> I don\'t have tooth decay.
>> or: I don\'t suffer from tooth decay.
2. I want to chew lots of foods.
>> correct
>> or: Chew your food well to avoid choking.
3. I don\'t like plaque because it looks yucky.
>> correct
>> or: Plaque makes us look dirty and unhygienic.
4. Flossing is very important for my tooth.
>> Flossing is very important in having healthy teeth.
5. I want to be a dentist!
>> correct
>> or: I dream to be a dentist!
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