HOMEWORK 10/21, When I feel happy
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Oh!
Doing simple things can really make us happy. I can truly say that you are doing a great job making you and your family happy.
You just have to do what s right and have a big smile on your face.
T. Jeny
Friend Jeny.
>>correct
It\'s nice to hear your voice again.
>>It was nice to hear your voice again.
== body ==
There are too many things that makes me happy.
>>correct
I want to write about those regardless priority.
>>I want to write about these things regardless of it\'s order.
Those are the following cases as below:
>>These are the following cases:
When ~:
- I got a perfect score at your homework.
>>I get a perfect score at my homework.
- I solve program error on time.
>>I solve an error in our program.
- My wife laughs out loudly with bright face.
>>My wife laughs out loud with a bright face.
- I go to see the shows with my family like movie, musical, play.
>>I go out and see a movie, musical or play with my family.
- I exercise and biking with my family.
>>I exercise and ride a bike with my family.
- I go out to picnic or dinner or travel .
>>I go out for a picnic, dinner or travel.
- My son and daughter get a job soon after graduation.
>>My son and daughter immediately got a job after graduation.
- I drink beer or SOJU and talk to good neighbor.
>>I drink beer or soju and talk with my neighbor.
- I meet my best friends.
>>correct
- I can do my daily routines like exercising, playing guitar.
>> I can do my daily routines like exercising and playing guitar.
- Others require me to need my help.
>>Others require me to help them.
- I receive salary.
>>I receive my salary.
- I feel desire to do meaningful something.
>>I feel I\'ve done something meaningful.
i have a positive character.
>>correct
And I give thanks to all circumstances,
>>correct
But, I am neither God nor honor.
>>But I am not God.
I am only gentleman who hope to keep it up.
>>I am only a gentleman who hope to keep it up.
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