Homework 10/24
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Someone said, "If you even had a friend who you can believe, then you lived a successful life.
Like this sentence, relationship with my friend is not only important, but is also difficult to manage it.
In my case, I went to a high-school in Ulsan city that is famous as Hyundai-automobile started from.
That's the reason why I have various friends in my hometown and Ulsan.
Although my middle school friends in my hometown prefer to be active and do using their physical like soccer, my high-school friends in Ulsan are usually interested in going abroad and doing special experiences.
Even though these differences are influenced by their growth environment, those were not big problems for us to be friends.
I surely have kept in touch with my friends for now.
I think being friendly with my friends is not difficult.
In short, say sorry when you mistook to your friend, and express your gratitude when your friend gave me a favor.
In addition, The closer friends, the more politely you treat them.
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Hey there, Ian!!:)
Happy Wednesday..
How are you doing today?
Good job in doing your homework as always.
I will see you soon.
~T. Lorna^-^
Someone said, \"If you even had a friend who you can believe, then you lived a successful life.
>> Someone people say that ,\"If you have a friend whom you can believe then you are living a successful life.\"
Like this sentence, relationship with my friend is not only important, but is also difficult to manage it.
>> This sentence is trying to say that my relationship with my friends is not only important but also difficult to manage.
In my case, I went to a high-school in Ulsan city that is famous as Hyundai-automobile started from.
>> In my case, I went to a high-school in Ulsan city. This city becomes famous because it is where Hyundai, one of the famous brand of automobile started.
That\'s the reason why I have various friends in my hometown and Ulsan.
>> That\'s the reason why I have various friends in my hometown and in Ulsan.
Although my middle school friends in my hometown prefer to be active and do using their physical like soccer, my high-school friends in Ulsan are usually interested in going abroad and doing special experiences.
>> Although my middle school friends in my hometown prefer to be physically active like playing soccer, my high-school friends in Ulsan are usually interested in going abroad trying to experience something different.
Even though these differences are influenced by their growth environment, those were not big problems for us to be friends.
>> These differences are influenced by the environment where they grew up and these aren\'t big problems that can affect our friendships.
I surely have kept in touch with my friends for now.
>> I am surely keeping in touch with my old friends until now.
I think being friendly with my friends is not difficult.
>> Correct!
In short, say sorry when you mistook to your friend, and express your gratitude when your friend gave me a favor.
>> In short, say sorry when you mistook to your friend and express your gratitude when your friend did a favor for you.
In addition, The closer friends, the more politely you treat them.
>> In addition, the closer you are to your friends then the more polite you are to them.
Happy Wednesday..
How are you doing today?
Good job in doing your homework as always.
I will see you soon.
~T. Lorna^-^
Someone said, \"If you even had a friend who you can believe, then you lived a successful life.
>> Someone people say that ,\"If you have a friend whom you can believe then you are living a successful life.\"
Like this sentence, relationship with my friend is not only important, but is also difficult to manage it.
>> This sentence is trying to say that my relationship with my friends is not only important but also difficult to manage.
In my case, I went to a high-school in Ulsan city that is famous as Hyundai-automobile started from.
>> In my case, I went to a high-school in Ulsan city. This city becomes famous because it is where Hyundai, one of the famous brand of automobile started.
That\'s the reason why I have various friends in my hometown and Ulsan.
>> That\'s the reason why I have various friends in my hometown and in Ulsan.
Although my middle school friends in my hometown prefer to be active and do using their physical like soccer, my high-school friends in Ulsan are usually interested in going abroad and doing special experiences.
>> Although my middle school friends in my hometown prefer to be physically active like playing soccer, my high-school friends in Ulsan are usually interested in going abroad trying to experience something different.
Even though these differences are influenced by their growth environment, those were not big problems for us to be friends.
>> These differences are influenced by the environment where they grew up and these aren\'t big problems that can affect our friendships.
I surely have kept in touch with my friends for now.
>> I am surely keeping in touch with my old friends until now.
I think being friendly with my friends is not difficult.
>> Correct!
In short, say sorry when you mistook to your friend, and express your gratitude when your friend gave me a favor.
>> In short, say sorry when you mistook to your friend and express your gratitude when your friend did a favor for you.
In addition, The closer friends, the more politely you treat them.
>> In addition, the closer you are to your friends then the more polite you are to them.
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