Homework(10/24): Cooking meals at home
학생이 쓴 원문
Friend Jen.
I am pleased to hear that you are safe in the midst of unprecedented, very strong typhoon. But I am sorry that i didn't search the influence of typhoon in your country, I hope your country is also safe.
I have just downloaded a new textbook,"@SENIOR_INTERMEDIATE_UPPER" and printed it at office and i will file it into clear file folder at my home.
I am proud of my perseverance and These all thanks to you.
= body =
I can't cook my meals exception Ramen(in Korean). haha
I think some of the advantages and disadvantages of cooking my meals at home as below
1) Advantages :
- Can save some money to buy the meal.
- Be happy if be with my family.
- Can eat remaining meals again later.
2) Disadvantages :
- Take a long time.
- My wife is too hard although it is easy to cook
- Need many kinds of seasoning such as soy sauce, onion, pepper, salt, sugar, and so on.
강사 첨삭
Hello Oh,
I do hope that you can achieve all of your goals this year because I know you can learn from all of this experiences.
I am very happy to read your homework because these activities are beneficial for you. In addition, it can also help you improve you skills in English, as a result you\'ll be successful in life. Thank you very much!!!
T. Jeny
Friend Jen.
>>correctI am pleased to hear that you are safe in the midst of unprecedented, very strong typhoon.
>>I am pleased to hear that you are safe in the midst of unprecedented strong typhoon.
But I am sorry that i didn\'t search the influence of typhoon in your country, I hope your country is also safe.>>But I am sorry that I didn\'t search the effects of the typhoon in your country, I hope your country is also safe.I have just downloaded a new textbook,\"@SENIOR_INTERMEDIATE_UPPER\" and printed it at office and i will file it into clear file folder at my home.
>>I have just downloaded a new textbook,\"@SENIOR_INTERMEDIATE_UPPER\" and printed it in the office and I will file it into a clear file folder at home.I am proud of my perseverance and these all thanks to you.>>correct= body =I can\'t cook my meals exception Ramen(in Korean). haha
>>I can\'t cook my meals except Korean Ramen. hahaI think some of the advantages and disadvantages of cooking my meals at home as below
>>I think some of the advantages and disadvantages of cooking my meals at home are listed below1) Advantages :
>>correct- Can save some money to buy the meal.
>>correct- Be happy if be with my family.
>>Be happy if I am with my family.- Can eat remaining meals again later.>>Can eat the remaining meals again.2) Disadvantages :
>>correct- Take a long time.
>>correct- My wife is too hard although it is easy to cook
>>It would be difficult for my wife even if it is easy to cook- Need many kinds of seasoning such as soy sauce, onion, pepper, salt, sugar, and so on.
>>Need many kinds of seasonings such as soy sauce, onion, pepper, salt, sugar, and so on.
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