Homework 10/25
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you ever read magazines or news articles about health? If yes, what subject(s) do you find the most interesting?
When I was serving in military, I had nothing but exercising.
This situation made me to be interested in my health naturally.
By health magazines or articles, I got a lot of information about a nutrient.
For instance, "How much should I take a protein a day", or "Which form is good for my muscle."
Even though I was all about my health in a military, I drank so much after finishing my serving.
Eventually, my body, healthy and solid, went back to before.
What I realized from this result is that the constant attitude is most important.
In other words, interests about our health should be our habits.
In my case, it is very difficult to endure a pain and it leads to giving up.
That the reason why I don't go to gym and try to what I can enjoy constantly.
It once was swimming, and now, jusitsu.
I'm not only enjoying to exercise, but also learning a new technical as a hobby.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Ian!!
How are you?
Thanks for doing your homework regularly.
Keep up!
I\'ll see you later!!:)
~T. Lorna^-^
When I was serving in military, I had nothing but exercising.
>> When I was serving in the military, I had nothing to do but to exercise.
This situation made me to be interested in my health naturally.
This situation made me to be interested in my health naturally.
>> This situation made me interested in taking care of my health naturally.
By health magazines or articles, I got a lot of information about a nutrient.
By health magazines or articles, I got a lot of information about a nutrient.
>> By reading health magazines or articles, I got to know a lot of information about nutrients.
For instance, \"How much should I take a protein a day\", or \"Which form is good for my muscle.\"
For instance, \"How much should I take a protein a day\", or \"Which form is good for my muscle.\"
>> For instance, I asked myself, \"How much protein should I take in a day?\", or \"Which form is good for my muscles?\"
Even though I was all about my health in a military, I drank so much after finishing my serving.
Even though I was all about my health in a military, I drank so much after finishing my serving.
>> Even though I was taking care of my health when I was at the military service, I drank so much after finishing my service.
Eventually, my body, healthy and solid, went back to before.
Eventually, my body, healthy and solid, went back to before.
>> Eventually, my body figure and health returned back to what it was before my military service.
What I realized from this result is that the constant attitude is most important.
What I realized from this result is that the constant attitude is most important.
>> These results made me realized that being constant in everything we do is very important.
In other words, interests about our health should be our habits.
In other words, interests about our health should be our habits.
>> In other words, having constant interests about our health should be one of our habits.
In my case, it is very difficult to endure a pain and it leads to giving up.
In my case, it is very difficult to endure a pain and it leads to giving up.
>> In my case, it is very difficult to endure the pain and it leads me to giving up.
That the reason why I don\'t go to gym and try to what I can enjoy constantly.
That the reason why I don\'t go to gym and try to what I can enjoy constantly.
>> This is the reason why I don\'t go to gym and try what I can enjoy constantly.
It once was swimming, and now, jusitsu.
It once was swimming, and now, jusitsu.
>> Last time, I do swimming but now I do jujitsu.
I\'m not only enjoying to exercise, but also learning a new technical as a hobby.
I\'m not only enjoying to exercise, but also learning a new technical as a hobby.
>> I\'m not only enjoying to exercise, but I am also learning new techniques as a hobby.
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