Homework 10/26
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Do you watch your weight? What foods do you think are healthy?
I think that a weight is not the only standard of a health.
Because a weight reflects not all things like a proportion of muscles.
On the other hands, most people are often happy and sad while they are watching their weight.
People who know that a muscle is probably heavier than a fat are not only caring their weight, but also considering exercising and a daily diet.
The professional health trainer says, to somebody, when people lose their weight, a diet is more important than exercising.
In addition, just doing not eating a food is a dangerous behavior.
We need some of fundamental nutrients, for example, carbon, protein, fat or something.
Therefore we should keep the balance when it comes to nutrients and make desirable habits.
For instance, one of habits that I recommend you is having a breakfast.
If you ain't eat a food in the morning, then your body would keep your energy and try to save your energy into forms of fat.
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>> I think that weight is not the only standard when checking the condition of our health.
Because a weight reflects not all things like a proportion of muscles.
Because a weight reflects not all things like a proportion of muscles.
>> Because weight doesn\'t reflects everything like when our muscles are proportion or not.
On the other hands, most people are often happy and sad while they are watching their weight.
On the other hands, most people are often happy and sad while they are watching their weight.
>> On the other hand, most people are often happy and sad while they are watching their weight.
People who know that a muscle is probably heavier than a fat are not only caring their weight, but also considering exercising and a daily diet.
People who know that a muscle is probably heavier than a fat are not only caring their weight, but also considering exercising and a daily diet.
>> People who know that a muscle is probably heavier than fats doesn\'t only care of their weight but also consider exercising and having a healthy daily diet.
The professional health trainer says, to somebody, when people lose their weight, a diet is more important than exercising.
The professional health trainer says, to somebody, when people lose their weight, a diet is more important than exercising.
>> Professional health trainers say that when people lose their weight, a diet is more important than exercising.
In addition, just doing not eating a food is a dangerous behavior.
In addition, just doing not eating a food is a dangerous behavior.
>> In addition, exercising without eating is dangerous.
We need some of fundamental nutrients, for example, carbon, protein, fat or something.
We need some of fundamental nutrients, for example, carbon, protein, fat or something.
>> We need some of the fundamental nutrients, for example, carbon, protein, fat and some important vitamins for our body.
Therefore we should keep the balance when it comes to nutrients and make desirable habits.
Therefore we should keep the balance when it comes to nutrients and make desirable habits.
>> Therefore, we should keep the balance when it comes to taking nutrients and we should make desirable habits.
For instance, one of habits that I recommend you is having a breakfast.
For instance, one of habits that I recommend you is having a breakfast.
>> For instance, one of the habits that I will recommend you is having a breakfast regularly.
If you ain\'t eat a food in the morning, then your body would keep your energy and try to save your energy into forms of fat.
If you ain\'t eat a food in the morning, then your body would keep your energy and try to save your energy into forms of fat.
>> If you won\'t eat food in the morning, then your body would keep your energy and try to convert your energy into a certain form of fat.
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