Homework {10/28}

2020-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Theme: Make a sentence using the words below. Use conjunctions in your sentences, example: but, also, and, so, for, or, yet, nor, either/or, neither/nor, not only/but also, until 1. The air pollution is very bad. 2. I came out at my house because I want to bye some vegetables. 3. The hottle is on fire so my family have to go home. 4. Casualty means a victim. 5. I have many fake jewals and my sister really like them.

강사 첨삭

Here\'s your corrected homework, Clair! 

Cheers,
Jean~~


Theme: Make a sentence using the words below. Use conjunctions in your sentences, example: but, also, and, so, for, or, yet, nor, either/or, neither/nor, not only/but also, until

1. The air pollution is very bad.
>> We have severe air pollution in Korea. 

2. I came out at my house because I want to bye some vegetables.
>> I came out of my house because I want to buy some vegetables. 

3. The hottle is on fire so my family have to go home.
>> The hotel is on fire so my family has to go home. 

4. Casualty means a victim.
>> Example sentence: The casualties of the typhoon were evacuated by the police. 

5. I have many fake jewals and my sister really like them.
>> I have several pieces of fake jewelry and my sister likes them very much. 

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